Even a
science fiction needs some passion to fuel the story. In most of my recent readings the romance runs in the background but on occasion it becomes critical to the plot. I want to use Nayla in the “having an affair” role perhaps with the young prince or better yet the slave. She needs to neatly tie in to either the political or religious power on the planet. Let’s make her Painters niece. She is loved by the prince but in love with the slave.
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